I am a Year 8 student at Kereru Park Campus in Auckland, NZ. I am in Akomanga 3 and my Kaiako is Whaea Lujoe. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
hi Isaiah Tarshana here,I just wanted to say you are very creative in your writing and I thought it was amazing. I also love horror stories and maybe next time you could try doing a bit more to it or you could make it more scary.
hi Isaiah Tarshana here,I just wanted to say you are very creative in your writing and I thought it was amazing. I also love horror stories and maybe next time you could try doing a bit more to it or you could make it more scary.
ReplyDeletehi lzaiah nice post it was a amazing story to read but make to more
ReplyDeleteexciting but good story